Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

It is of
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notion that
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constant technological advancement has
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to various changes in humankind’s general
lives
. Personally, I completely agree with
this
view for a variety of reasons.
To begin
with, metamorphosis has already occurred
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occasions through novel tech.
For example
, the ubiquitous introduction of the Internet. Humanity has
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from physically mailing letters,
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in phone booths, to most of the time, staying indoors without the need of commuting outside to mingle with a friend or a social circle.
Moreover
, the healthcare and medical branch have made significant breakthroughs thanks to
technology
. Whether it be the invention of MRI scanning machines or X-ray scanners, it has not only lengthened
human’s
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longevity but
also
saved millions of
lives
.
Furthermore
, the recent rapid development of AI has
also
bring
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forth a reconsideration
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work ethics.
This
is because AI has
lead
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to the automation of several manual jobs, leading to job displacement and the need for re-skilling.
For instance
, the AI assistant Chat-GPT can automate customer service and support,
thus
generating layoffs and new potential job restructuring for human workers. Another reason can be that
technology
has created new ethical dilemmas,
such
as the impact on privacy and security, and the potential for addiction and social isolation. In conclusion,
technology
has indeed revolutionised many parts of people’s
lives
. In my opinion,
technology
will continue to thrive as an industry and will
further
revolutionise every part of people’s
lives
if given sufficient time for substantial growth.
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