Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are many trends that become popular all around the world. So that,
people
are able to get the same
products
and,
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hence
, become more and more similar to each other.
While
others argue so, I believe that there are some positive effects of it. On the one hand, similarity among
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can cause
the
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problems with self-confidence and some mental disorders.
For instance
, in some developed countries there were
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cases when a teenager committed
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suicide because of the same cloth
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another teen.
Moreover
, if there are the same
products
anywhere in the world, they will be no uniqueness
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the country, or even nation.
For example
, there will be no attractiveness and interest
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the country, if tourists can not buy any unique product there.
On the other hand
, there are some positive effects of
this
event
such
as big economic incomes for companies that sell
products
.
For instance
, big popularity got clothes from Zara, which is widely advertised by every second blogger.
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hence
people
are all covered by fashionable shirts and Zara company has good advantages from it.
Furthermore
, buying similar
products
means that
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quality already checked by someone and now is ready to exploit.
For instance
, if one day a blogger tries some make-up
products
and proves that it is qualified,
then
next
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day
people
all around the world try it. In conclusion, I consider that there are some positive consequences of countries getting more and more similar,
such
as economic advantages for companies selling
products
and quality
proveness
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proves
for
people
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.
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  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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