Companies and individuals, and not governments should pay the bill of pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that the private
companies
and
people
should pay the bill for
pollution
,
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and not the authorities. I totally disagree with
this
statement because
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governments
,
companies
, and individuals are fully responsible for
pollution
issue
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. To being with, there are several reasons I believe
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governments
,
companies
, and
people
should pay for
pollution
.
Firstly
,
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most
of
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pollution
in all forms namely, water, air,
noise
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is
result
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the result
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of
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the absent
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absent
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of harsh laws from
governments
to set
limit
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limits
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of
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pollution
from factories and cars , which means
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governments
should take actions to tackle
this
issue by
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money for eco-friendly projects namely, solar, wind, desalination power plants in order to mitigate
this
issue .
Also
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the
companies
should take responsibility for
clean
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up the
pollution
.
This
is because the most
pollution
comes from private
companies
who use
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fossil fuel to run their factories ,which
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factories release a huge amount of Co2 footprint
to
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the atmosphere .
Furthermore
,
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private
companies
make money
form
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from
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invest
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in these projects, which means they should give back to society by
donate
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money to help to reduce
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pollution
. Regarding
people
, the most
pollution
comes from
use
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people
for their private vehicles rather than public transport, which means
people
contribute to
pollution
and they should pay
for
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clean the
pollution
.
Also
,
people
consumpution
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consumption
a significant amount of goods .
In other words
, these goods
comes
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from deforestation,
this
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because forest play a key role to absorb Co2 emissions
fron
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from
the earth.
To sum up
, In my opinion,
governments
,
companies
,
people
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are
resposible
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responsible
about
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for
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pollution
, and they should pay
funds
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for funds
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to
reudce
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reduce
the
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pollution
.
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