In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could taken to solve them.

It is true that in many countries

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people

’s

weight

averages are going up.

Moreover

, they do not pay attention to their

health

and the volume of fitness is going down. In

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the causes and solutions to tackle

this

problem will be discussed. Nowadays, obesity is one of the most important problems in some countries and is rising.

However

, the level of

health

and working out are decreasing. There are some reasons for these issues. One of the reasons is that individuals want to live better,

such

as

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a new car

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or

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a big house. To reach

this

objective they have to earn more money, so they stay in their office to work more, or they get

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hustle.

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pressure makes them exhausted and they do not have enough energy to go to the gym. Another reason is that fast

food

is cheap and delicious and a lot of

people

eat it almost

everyday

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without thinking of the consequences of it, so in the long

term

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their

health

might be in danger and get some diseases like blood pressure.

Therefore

, heavy workload and fast

food

are two important causes

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increasing the average

weight

of

people

and decreasing

health

.

However

, there are some ways for solving these problems.

Firstly

, governments can play a key role.

For instance

, advertising on

benefits

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the benefits

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of working out, or

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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of eating fast

food

can influence

people

to pay more attention to their

health

and diet.

Secondly

, companies can give some facilities to their employers for going to the gym and decrease their

weight

, or they can

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some sports competition and make a good prize for the winner.

This

might encourage

people

to do some exercises and be ready for the competition. In conclusion, as a matter of

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people

’s

weight

are

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increasing, and their levels of

health

and fitness are decreasing. Two important causes of these issues are earning more money and eating fast

food

. And for solving governments and companies can play a key role.