You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it
Dear Rohan,
I hope you reached
to
your destination safely.I just writing to inform you about Change preposition
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disappointing
news that happened Correct article usage
the disappointing
last
week .
Actually,as you know last
few days weather was not good as well as
last
weekend suddenly a huge storm came and damage many things and it was very dangerous i
had never seen it before .
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I
How ever
,Correct your spelling
However
i
want to tell you from the deepest of my heart that your favourite car which Change the capitalization
I
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was giffted
giffted
from your grandmother on your birthday Correct your spelling
gifted
due to
this
bigg
storm the car windows were broken and two dents Correct your spelling
big
present
on it .
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were present
According to
me, we want to repair it soon and i
called Change the capitalization
I
to
the vehicle insurance company Change preposition
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as well as
they started the process and i
want to tell you please send me the whole paper so we will start Change the capitalization
I
further
process. You do not worry about it I will Add an article
the further
be
manage .you just enjoy your Unnecessary verb
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vacations
.
Keep in touch,
Best Regards ,
KamaldeepFix the agreement mistake
vacation
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite