You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it

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Dear Rohan, I hope you reached

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your destination safely.I just writing to inform you about

disappointing

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news that happened

last

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week . Actually,as you know

last

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few days weather was not good

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weekend suddenly a huge storm came and damage many things and it was very dangerous

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had never seen it before .

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want to tell you from the deepest of my heart that your favourite car which

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giffted

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gifted

from your grandmother on your birthday

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this

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bigg

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big

storm the car windows were broken and two dents

present

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on it .

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me, we want to repair it soon and

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called

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the vehicle insurance company

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they started the process and

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want to tell you please send me the whole paper so we will start

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further

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process. You do not worry about it I will

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manage .you just enjoy your

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. Keep in touch, Best Regards , Kamaldeep

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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