You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The cost of

education

has become an important topic which divides

the

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public opinion. As a matter of fact, there is a bifurcation between those who think that the

government

should subsidize the students that want to go to

universities

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and those who think that

education

shouldn't be free. In

this

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I will discuss my perspective on the issue and I will explain why I completely agree with the first statement presented above. First and foremost, I believe that by paying full course fees the

government

could effectively encourage students to pursue academic studies, especially those who can't afford them. Most of the time, in fact,

people

are kept from attending

universities

simply because of their financial situation. I believe that the authorities should be responsible for the payment because

education

is a fundamental right,

therefore

everyone should have the same possibilities, regardless of their annual income.

In addition

this

, by making

education

free and accessible to everyone, the

government

makes an investment for the future, since a lot more

people

would be actually encouraged to study, which means that an important problem, like the scarcity of applicants for jobs that require a degree -

such

as doctors and engineers - could be potentially solved.

However

, even though studying is a right, it's not a duty.

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means that

people

could feel as

they

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owe something to the

government

, simply because the latter is paying for their studies, which can result in

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heavy psychological burden.

Besides

, despite the fact that statistically most of the students that go to

universities

want to really increase their cultural baggage, there is a number of

people

that would go to university only because they don't want to work.

This

can result both in an economic loss for the

government

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and in a lack of applicants for manual

labors

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, like plumbers or electricians.

To conclude

, I believe that despite the disadvantages above mentioned the

government

should pay entirely for those who want to go to

universities

, since the advantages overshadow the drawbacks.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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