The table above shows that the United States, European countries and other countries gave grants between 2006 and 2010 to developing countries.

The table above shows that the United States, European countries and other countries gave grants between 2006 and 2010 to developing countries.
The table above shows that the United States, European
countries
and other
countries
gave grants between 2006 and 2010 to developing
countries
.
Overall
, the total contribution of the world has increased except in 2009 and the United States is the largest contributor in
three
countries
while
Europe and other
countries
contribute the same amount to developing
countries
. The United States funded $9.8
million
for developing
countries
three
times as much as the EU and other
countries
compared with $3.1 and $2.8
million
, respectively. The total finance for developing
countries
increased significantly from the
three
regions to $24.4
million
in 2006 to $0.9
million
in 2008. $28.1
million
was money that all
three
regions donated to developing regions by the end of the period. Among the U.S.
countries
still contributing the most was $20.3
million
, much larger than the total of the European and other
countries
($4.1 in Europe and $3.7 in other
countries
).
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