The bar chart shows how many tourists visit four different museums in London over a five month period from June to October.
The bar chart shows how many tourists visit four different museums in London over a
five
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five-month
month
period from June to October.
In general, all museums witness natural fluctuations in the number
of visitors
. Moreover
, the British
Museum
seems to be the most popular tourist destination.
For the first two months of this
period, all the data remained virtually unchanged with the number
of people visiting the British
Museum
of History, the British
Museum
and the Museum
of Science standing above 400.00 while
the figures for the National Museum
are significantly lower, around 200,000. By August the British
Museum
had attracted the highest number
of visitors
, with around 710,000, followed by the number
for the Historical Museum
accurately 600,000 people. While
museum
of Science figures remained the same in July and August, the National Correct your spelling
Museum
Museum
observed a significant growth to 300,000 in August.
Visitors
to British
and historical museums declined from month
to month
while
science Museum
figures rose slightly to 500,000 in September before falling to 300,000 in the last
month
. Finally
, the number
of visitors
of
the National Change preposition
to
Museum
was relatively static at about 20,000 in the remaining months.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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