The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the lifecycle of
Salmon
, beginning from egg to matured fish
.
To begin
with, the cycle begins in the river whereby one male and one female Salmon
mate and the female produces lots of small eggs in the creek which is known as an incubation period after that fish
larvae emerge.
Furthermore
, after the emergence phase, they develop into tiny fish
and move to the areas of freshwater where they stay temporarily before moving to the estuary which is the intersection between river and ocean and then
shift to rearing areas which are in the ocean. The growth and maturation of Salmon
occur in the ocean. Once fish
reach adulthood they move to the stream which is the spawning place.
In conclusion, the life cycle of Salmon
is depicted in different stages that
are spawning, incubation, emergence, freshwater rearing, estuary rearing and migration to rearing areas which is quite fascinating.Correct pronoun usage
which
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