Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in life. What do you think are the reasons of it? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
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people
want to have babies later in their life, because Add an article
the people
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many humans who want to build their own Change preposition
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career
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. Many people believe that they need money Correct pronoun usage
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growing
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the
children. I can’t disagree with that. We all need some cash, for our needs. In order to have a Change the word
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, you must to
prepare responsibly. On the one hand, children are the flowers of life,who will help their parents in the future and make life happy, Change the verb form
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on the other hand
, there will be a lot of costs in order to raise a good person. In my opinion, if I wanted to have a child
, at first,
I would get on my feet, and opened
my own business, to approach Wrong verb form
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such
responsibility AS soon as I achive
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achieve
this
?
It will be possible to think about the birth of the Change the punctuation
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child
. Do not forget that not everybody has the opportunity to feed their family. For example
, people who haven’t got such
kind of conditions like: tasty food, house
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the
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good
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then
every family is obliged to have at least one child
due to
the decline in population growth. In conclusion, I would like to say that everyone has the right to chose
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until they reach their goal or live for themselves.Correct the article-noun agreement
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