The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
fish including different stages from its egg Use synonyms
stage
to adulthood. Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the Linking Words
salmon
fish goes through eight phases to fully grow from their hatching period, and they live in three different areas - river, estuary, and ocean.
In the first Use synonyms
stage
, adult Use synonyms
salmon
fishes lay Use synonyms
eggs
in rivers and incubate Use synonyms
eggs
there. After emerging from Use synonyms
eggs
, the infant Use synonyms
salmon
spend their next Use synonyms
stage
in freshwater, and Use synonyms
this
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stage
is called emergence. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, they stay in freshwater to grow Linking Words
further
.
Following that, these fishes go to river estuaries where their rearing continues. At Linking Words
this
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stage
, their size becomes a bit larger. Afterwards, the maturing fishes migrate to the ocean and eventually become adults. Use synonyms
Lastly
, grownup salmons move to the river for spawning and lay Linking Words
eggs
. Use synonyms
Thus
the life cycle, which repeats over and over again, starts.Linking Words
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