The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
fish including different stages from its egg stage
to adulthood. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the salmon
fish goes through eight phases to fully grow from their hatching period, and they live in three different areas - river, estuary, and ocean.
In the first stage
, adult salmon
fishes lay eggs
in rivers and incubate eggs
there. After emerging from eggs
, the infant salmon
spend their next stage
in freshwater, and this
stage
is called emergence. Subsequently
, they stay in freshwater to grow further
.
Following that, these fishes go to river estuaries where their rearing continues. At this
stage
, their size becomes a bit larger. Afterwards, the maturing fishes migrate to the ocean and eventually become adults. Lastly
, grownup salmons move to the river for spawning and lay eggs
. Thus
the life cycle, which repeats over and over again, starts.Submitted by Zolboo on
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