“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.
Many believe that preventing diseases is more important
that
research and Correct word choice
than
treatment
because that is
less costly. In my opinion, investments in preventive measures should have a greater emphasis because this
will give a
better public Remove the article
apply
health
and it is cheaper for both the individual and public
.
In general, when a person is healthy, he or she is able to have a better quality of life. More Correct article usage
the public
specific
, the person is able to function better at home with family, Replace the word
specifically
will
function better at work, and in the broader society. Correct word choice
and will
Consequently
, increasing the person is benefitting and
the public. Even though there is a Correct word choice
apply
treatment
for an illness, when it strikes, all three domains will be affected. Namely, the family have increased expense
of medicine and less social interaction. Correct article usage
the expense
In addition
, companies have a
lost Correct article usage
apply
employee
.
Treating diseases is a costly affair for individuals and the public. In many cases, simple everyday measures Fix the agreement mistake
employees
such
as training, reducing alcohol and quit
smoking will impact Wrong verb form
quitting
health
, reducing the expenses related to cardiac, transplantation and cancer treatment
respectively. For example
, in a recent study, researches
found out that a third of morbidity and mortality in Norway is preventable with lifestyle changes. Correct your spelling
researchers
Although
research is also
important, expenses in this
regard outweighs
the effects a preventive approach Change the verb form
outweigh
have
.
In conclusion, there are simple and cheap methods for Correct subject-verb agreement
has
health
gain that should be invested in. Despite the importance in
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of
treatment
, preventing diseases results in better
quality of life for individuals and Add an article
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