“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Many believe that preventing diseases is more important

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research and

treatment

because

that is

less costly. In my opinion, investments in preventive measures should have a greater emphasis because

this

will give

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better public

health

and it is cheaper for both the individual and

public

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the public

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. In general, when a person is healthy, he or she is able to have a better quality of life. More

specific

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, the person is able to function better at home with family,

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and will

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function better at work, and in the broader society.

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the public. Even though there is a

treatment

for an illness, when it strikes, all three domains will be affected. Namely, the family have increased

expense

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the expense

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of medicine and less social interaction.

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, companies have

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lost

employee

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employees

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. Treating diseases is a costly affair for individuals and the public. In many cases, simple everyday measures

such

as training, reducing alcohol and

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smoking will impact

health

, reducing the expenses related to cardiac, transplantation and cancer

treatment

respectively.

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, in a recent study,

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found out that a third of morbidity and mortality in Norway is preventable with lifestyle changes.

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research is

also

important, expenses in

this

regard

outweighs

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the effects a preventive approach

have

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. In conclusion, there are simple and cheap methods for

health

gain that should be invested in. Despite the importance

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research and

treatment

, preventing diseases results in

better

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quality of life for individuals and

reduce

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reduces

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public expenses on the

health

budget.