As earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on earth. To what extent do you agree with them? What alternatives might there be to exploiting space for natural resources?

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of the lack of natural

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in the world, people begin to do research about moving to another planet. Meanwhile, the opposite think that it is not one of the options, it will be better to focus on finding the possible solution from where we live today. In my point of, view I could say that it is not the solution to find the other place to live rather than

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. There is plenty of alternatives in

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world that can provide our life

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of bothering the balance of

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space. I do believe that all of the creatures are provided with enough

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to keep them alive. They just need to work for it and take enough amount for themselves.

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is why,

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of trying to find another place to be exploited, they must try to be more grateful for everything served by the

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them.

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, to keep

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enough for all the livelihood, a minimal life can be one of the solutions. In order to keep the sustainability of natural

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, it is important to limit the usage of unrenewable products.

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, starting to use more public transportation. It can impact

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the lower number of transport using carbon fuel that

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good for

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.

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, the place

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planned to move to maybe can not provide the same environment as the one on

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. It probably needs many improvements in the human body to survive there, and it needs a huge amount of costs.

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, it is not something that can be easily implemented. To make it worse, moving to another planet might disturb the local ecosystem. Moving there can destroy their balance and can lead to a new war.

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, I disagree with the idea of moving somewhere from

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because I believe, the

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is still worth living. ,

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we can try to find the alternative to fulfil our needs,

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as trying to utilize the provided sources and limit the use of destroying products.