There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country . Write him/her a letter and invite your friend. Explain what happens at the party describe the tradition and why itʼs important in your country say why itʼs important for your friend to be there .

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Dear Anne, Hope everything is fine with you. I am writing

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letter to invite you to the

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festival which will be held in another two weeks' time. I hope you won’t be having lectures at your university by that time since your vacation starts, as I remember. The

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is a very crucial religious festival, which is celebrated by Buddhists annually. A lot of interesting events are organized by Buddhists during

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period. You can experience them and get to know our Buddhist culture well. I can imagine what a fantastic feeling that you can get out of all. The

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festival is very important for Buddhists for many reasons.

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is celebrated to commemorate the introduction of Buddhism to Sri Lanka by Mahinda Thero. Different activities will be taking place based on the festival. It's a surprise that you have to come and experience them by yourself. My family is

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waiting for your arrival since they didn't see you for a couple of years. And please give regards to your mom and dad as well. Cannot wait to see you soon! Best regards Yours Chandana

chandana.sgcThu Jun 22 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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