In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been a perpetual debate about the advancement of technology in
cars
. In the years to come, most vehicles
such
as trucks, and public transit locomotives which include buses and cars
will not need a driver. There will be no need for them and only travellers will occupy space in the vehicles
. According to
me, the chances of outweighing the vehicles
with drivers would be very low as it is not practically possible.
First of all, driverless
cars
entirely depend upon technology, which means they have more accuracy and precision while
driving on the road
. In addition
to that, they can reduce the chances of road
accidents because of their in-built ability to analyze the traffic at a much faster rate than a human can do. For example
, a well-renowned company, Tesla has developed such
technology-based locomotives that do not need a driver but are more swift and intelligent. They have an intrinsic capability to stop in case of a serious chance of an accident.
On the contrary
, there are some lackings that lower the impact and reputation of driverless
cars
. One such
disadvantage is their zero-intelligence which makes them less reliable. In addition
to that, they cannot value human life. This
can impose a serious threat to the passengers sitting inside. Furthermore
, technology cannot believed to be accurate all the time. For example
, leading research has shown that driverless
locomotes sometimes can lose track of the road
which can lead to serious injuries to the passengers.
To conclude
, although
there are some advantages of driverless
vehicles
but
they cannot be made in charge of people's lives. They can have a higher hand on Remove the conjunction
apply
cars
driven by the man in terms of accuracy but they can falter in case of changes on the road
. This
means it becomes difficult for driverless
vehicles
to dominate the market and win the trust of the people.Submitted by M.zeshan5999 on
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