The given bar chart presents how many million people used various types of public transport in Milan from 2010 to 2014.

The given bar chart presents how many million people used various types of public transport in Milan from 2010 to 2014.
The given bar chart presents how many
million
people used various types of public transport in Milan from 2010 to 2014. In general, the highest usage of transportation in Milan was the metro,
while
the least chosen transport type was taxis. Looking at the details, train
users
experienced a 0.2 increase over three
years
(2010-2012). In 2013 the
number
of train
users
was 2.3
million
,
however
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the next
year
it rose to 3.6
million
. The share of people who used buses
in
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the beginning of the period was 1.0 ,the next two
years
buses section experienced fluctuation.From 2012 to 2014 (1.8-2.4) the proportion of bus
users
increased by 0.3. Regarding trams
figures
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it is interesting to note that for the first two ,
years
the
number
of tram
users
was more than bus
users
,
however
for the next three
years
the
number
of passengers who travelled by bus outnumbered the ones who choose trams. In 2014 there was a 0.2
million
difference in favour of busses. Turning to the other details, passengers of taxis were growing up every
year
from (2010-2014) that were 0.6
in
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the beginning of the
year
and end up with 1.0
million
users
. Though, all these types of transportation faced growth, demand for the metro was the highest in the chart (3.0-5.0
million
) in all the given
years
in the chart. The
number
of people hit 5.0
million
passengers in 2014 which was a record quantity for
this
year
amount all the transports.
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