Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads, and this can cause problems for both of them. Why is this the case? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

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actual
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distinguish
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, their
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and
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made
a huge problems
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for
drivers
. There are conflicting driver
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the roads which cannot
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together. If
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problem
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may rises.
car
drivers
and cyclist shares the same portion of the road. In the following paragraphs, I will explain what are the consequences
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the problem and provide
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and the corresponding problem. The combination of
car
drivers
and cyclists can cause a humongous number of
accidents
. It is because the actual
lines
between
two
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mentioned
groups
are not
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.
Therefore
, the possibility of
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high.
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, In Iran, there is no actual
line
for
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cyclists
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, so they go to the
car
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and
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accident might happen,
that is
why the death toll and injury
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accidents
are always high. To tackle the
issue
, their
lines
can be separated and their
line
is
also
as important as the
car
lines
and even bus
lines
. Traffic
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could be considered as the other consequence
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the above statement. Because cyclists destroy discipline of the
car
drivers
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car
drivers
cannot endure the activity of cyclists so they even
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the discipline
in
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the roads
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overtaking each other.
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smooth. there is so
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and regulation for both
groups
.To address
this
issue
, some regulations and penalties must
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in place for the counties that still have problems
such
as heavy
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for both
groups
. In
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government plays a huge role to solve the
issue
.
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that is
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project for them to solve the
issue
, they can come up with
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and new regulations within a few years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • share the same roads
  • cause problems
  • lack of understanding
  • limited infrastructure
  • reckless behavior
  • increased awareness
  • education
  • enforcing traffic laws
  • regulations
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