The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
The chart shows the
age
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percentage of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and
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for 2050.
It is clear that
while
the
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percent
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of 60+ increased, the opposite was true for the
ages
of
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0-14 in Yemen and Italy.
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, the
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for
ages
15-59 was the highest in both countries. In Yemen, the
age
percent
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of 0-14 made up
to
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half as opposed to only 3,6% of
ages
60+ in 2000. The
figure
for
ages
15-59 was slightly lower at only 46,3% in 2000. It is
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age
percent
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of 15-59 and 60+ will grow in 2050, 57,3% and 5,7% respectively.
Also
, the
figure
for
ages
0-14 is projected to fall to 37% in 2050. Looking at the other parameters. In Italy, the
figure
for
ages
15-59 was
biggest
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with 61,6%
comparison
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with only 14,3%
ages
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0-14 in 2000. Followed by 24,1% of
ages
60+. The
age
percent
of 15-59 and 0-14
projected
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to decline in 2050 , 46,2% and 11,5% respectively.
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, there will be
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significant growth to 42,3% of
ages
60+.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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