2019-12-28: Task 1 You work in an international company. Write letter to the manager for allowing extra hours off during work time to attend family celebration. In your letter, you should: •explain why you want to take a day off •give details of the amount of time you need •suggest how your work be covered while your are away.

#work #company #manager #hours #time #celebration #•explain #•give #amount #•suggest

Dear Sir, I am one of the employees who work in the technological development department. I am writing

this

letter to inform you of my willingness to have an extra free day on Sunday if you do not mind. My son's marriage is on Sunday, it is in the city 'skirts so I have to travel by train Saturday night,

moreover

, he needs me to help with special arrangements.

Besides

, I have to go with the pride to the hotel and set up the dress for her. I will return back on Monday, I would like to have about 24 hours off but I will compensate for it in the next week. I had arranged my work time with my partner Sally, she will do my job and talk to the clients and register their names during my absence. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Rafal Latif

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

150 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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