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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Today,more and more people think professionals should
work
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 in their training
country
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.But others think they have the freedom to choose where
country
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 to
work
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. On the one hand,professionals who
work
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 in the
country
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 where they are trained could adapt their lifestyle and environment of
work
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 in their life.In fact,there are some familiar populations and surroundings they connected with during their training days.So it is significant to live and
work
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 in that
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 and fit it quickly.
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,when people are trained in the
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,they could make some friends,
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 as leaders and colleagues and understand the circumstances of
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,which could help them to have a better experience and chance when they look for a new job.Maybe someone will say it is not beneficial for their exercise in the future.But I think it is just a good choice to have a high-speed promotion and adaption.
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 it is a useful option to choose to
work
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 in their training
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.
On the other hand
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,specialists who
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 in other countries could improve their different experiences of working in their fields.
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,if they worked in the
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 where they trained,they could not learn other skills in their areas.
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,when people enter a new
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,they have to face a new challenge,which will promote their enthusiasm and passion to solve problems.
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 with prior opinion,it is a good way to improve problem-solving skills. In conclusion,
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 both opinions have their own reasons,I tend to choose the second choice because ,in the future,I hope to
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 in different countries where I do my training to enjoy new challenges and chances.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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