the chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.
The bar graphs depict information about how much
time
juveniles spend with their family members on weekdays and weekends
.
Overall
, on weekdays, the highest amounts of time
of
children spend with their Change preposition
apply
mother
, Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
whereas
on weekends
, they often prefer to spend with their parents
.
To begin
with, on weekdays, o-1 aged toddlers spend almost 9 hours
both
their Change preposition
with both
parents
and mostly with their mother
around 5 hours
everyday
. In the case of 2-3 Replace the word
every day
age
of children spend approximately 6 hours
with their mother
only and 1.5 hours
with both mother
and father 0.7 hours
with dad. The numbers of time
spend with their all family members near about 8 hours
is
collectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
In the
6-7 and 8-9 Change preposition
The
age
groups, spend similar time
separately with their mom
and dad and nearly 3 hours
with their parents
.
Moving further
, on the weekends
, o-1 age
of children spend time
with their mom
and parents
that is
accounted for nearly 8 hours
and with mom
less than 1 hour. Another all age
of
Change preposition
apply
groups
spend the majority of with both Fix the agreement mistake
group
mom
and father on Sunday and Saturday along with
being accompanied by father that
is almost 14 Correct pronoun usage
which
hours
on weekends
. Surprisingly, spending time
with mom
is less popular.Submitted by deepikanayyar1996
on
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