Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now--
Dear Sir ,
I am Rahul tenant of your flat no 802 , Prem Nagar. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the monthly rent
you increased is inappropriate.
To begin
with , I got shifted to your flat eleven months ago and it is clearly mentioned in the agreement after the completion of one year of my stay 5% rent
will be increased. Now I have noticed that you have increased the 15% rent
per month.
Secondly
, I have done a market survey and came to know that rent
is not beyond INR 20000/- Per month for 1 Bhk. Moreover
, I am the only earning person in my family so it is not possible for me to afford a 15% hike in rent
. In addition
, I really want to reside in your flat because it is very near to my office.
I request you to please have a look into this
matter and let me know whether it happened by mistake or else you want to increase the 15% rent
per month.
Waiting for a positive reply .
Regards
RahulSubmitted by preetiaug25 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Begin with 'Dear [Landlord's Name]' if you know it, and end with 'Yours sincerely,' if you used their name, or 'Yours faithfully,' if you didn't. More formal and varied sign-offs also showcase a higher mastery of language.
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