Some
people
believe that increasing
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between
countries
is leading
people
to learn about other
cultures
,
whereas
others think that it could
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tension between them. in the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail.
On the one hand, these days, the government of every
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have been trying to increase
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tourism, leading to learning various
cultures
from other
countries
.
In addition
,
people
can see how other
countries
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developed. To illustrate, many
countries
in the world,
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of hiring waitresses, leading to reducing the cost of hiring
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.
As a result
, the restaurant can save more money and spend
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other parts
such
as extending to many branches.
However
, the major benefit is that increasing
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can affect more tourists, leading to
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economic countries
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countries
.
On the other hand
, some
people
would be more
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from different
countries
.
For instance
, they might not
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with other
cultures
such
as speaking in a very loud noise and the food that some
countries
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.
In conclusion, improving travel between
countries
depends on each personal thinking. There are both benefits and drawbacks.
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some
people
think it is good that
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tourism should be increased, some believe that they cannot accept and feel uncomfortable about different
cultures
.