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Dear Jack... Thanks a lot for your email. I was so happy when I read your email. I'm glad you make a project. Your project on stars and their fans sounds exactly. I'm pleased to answer your question about Ryan Reynolds! Well, let me tell you my mind, he is playing his role very nicely and his role is actional. I've been a fan for over a year. I've seen all of his films so far. And I love it. I've seen the best film is"Life is Love". It is very great. Maybe, when you see it, you will love it and you dance during the movie.

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, Ryan Reynolds' "Free Guy" is quite good too. It is a film marvellous and action. It is about a game.

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, I'm planning a meeting. I hope so, I will meet you in Hollywood in 2030. Anyway, You'll ask me any questions if you have any problems with your project. I'll help as much as I can. Take care, and write back soon. All the best, Shahriyor

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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176 words

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Write a letter to a friend telling him about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend – How you found it?How it can help?How you use it?

Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Other say Olympic is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

The paragraph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six -month period in 2011.

While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals, others believe that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion? prison = dangrous, and consequence Rehabilitation = fix, mental problems