You need to take three days off work because of an important event. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you have to take time off work Give details such as when and where of the event Approving the importance of the event related to your work Suggest who could cover your place while you are away

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Dear Sir, I am one of the photographers in the company, the children's photography department. I would like to have three days off in order to attend an important event about how to deal with crying babies during the sessions.
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that I have to collect with me. It starts at 10:00Am on the 3rd of June, next week. It is in the High Star hotel, in the main hall from the entrance on the left if you would like to attend. It is very crucial for me to be there so I can manage and learn how to deal with crying babies within the same session.
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can learn some editing tricks which is important in Photoshop as well. I have talked to my partner Sally, she will do my work beside hers. She will be in charge of the new newborn sessions and can answer the questions of the clients. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Rafal Latif.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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