Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the min legal age for driving a car or motorbike.To what extent do you agree/disagree

In today's world, some believe that

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ought to raise the

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limit for driving licenses in both motorcycles and cars to decrease the number of crashes on the road. In my opinion, I do not agree with the statement since

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should increase

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for

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and give education as early as possible. First and foremost, the

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of 18 is quite enough to decide about something

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as choosing a president or driving legally.

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, to solve road safety problems, increasing the

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limit is not a permanent solution. There are more efficient solutions ,

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,

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should give lectures to increase public awareness about

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and give them when they are young like their middle school ages. In

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way, children have information about good pedestrian behaviours and

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will know their social responsibilities towards other drivers in

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.

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, drivers can do whatever they want, if

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are not deterred.

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,

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should rise the price or more crucial

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.

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, if the driver drifted on a public road or used loud exhaust, in these circumstances, authorities should give expensive

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.

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, if drivers races in the streets,

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should cancel

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person' license. In

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way, these kinds of individuals can not drive anymore because of harsh penalties.

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, considering everything that has been stated so far,

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some think that the suitable

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for driving should increase to develop

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safety, I do not agree with

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situation as it is not enough and there are more permanent solutions which are rising

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and giving education at a young

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.