The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The two maps illustrate the improvement of the area in a public
library
two decades ago and how it looks these days.
Overall
, there are significant changes in every area of the Central Library
from the past to the present. The library
seems more compact nowadays compared to the old ones.
20 years ago, there were tables and chairs in the main hall which was in the same location with fiction and non-fiction books for adults. In contrast
, nowadays, those facilities have been removed but there are sofas in the children’s area which are also
relocated to the new position, those areas can be accessed straightforwardly from the gate to the left corner. That place is bigger than in the past and provided storytelling events.
Furthermore
, in the new library
, the space for adult fiction books has been reduced since there is also
an information desk with some self-service machines. In the left room
from the gate, there is a computer room
which in the past was a reading room
. Moreover
, the cafe is a new facility that can be seen right after the main gate and that place has quite big same as the computer room
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