The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The two maps illustrate the improvement of the area in a public
library
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two decades ago and how it looks these days.
Overall
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, there are significant changes in every area of the Central
Library
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from the past to the present. The
library
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seems more compact nowadays compared to the old ones. 20 years ago, there were tables and chairs in the main hall which was in the same location with fiction and non-fiction books for adults.
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, nowadays, those facilities have been removed but there are sofas in the children’s area which are
also
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relocated to the new position, those areas can be accessed straightforwardly from the gate to the left corner. That place is bigger than in the past and provided storytelling events.
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, in the new
library
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, the space for adult fiction books has been reduced since there is
also
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an information desk with some self-service machines. In the left
room
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from the gate, there is a computer
room
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which in the past was a reading
room
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.
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, the cafe is a new facility that can be seen right after the main gate and that place has quite big same as the computer
room
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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