The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005
The line graph illustrates the sum of residents participating in 4 separate types of sports in one certain area from 1985 to 2005.
It is clear that
there was an upward tendency in the number of crowds joining in tennis
while
the figure for rugby players decreased significantly. Besides
, Basketball and badminton also
witnessed stability during the observed period.
In 1985, rugby was the most popular sport as it had nearly 250 participants. Meanwhile, about 150 people
took part in tennis
. Over the next decade, there was a drop of about 50 players in rugger while
the total of those in tennis
rose to 250 people
. From that year to 2005, rugby was less preferred, the number of people
playing it kept declining and then
reached a low of only 50 players in 2015, whereas
tennis
saw a rise to approximately 225 participants.
In addition
, in the year 1985, there were only 50 and 75 people
enjoying badminton and basketball respectively. They were not really concerned as the percentage of those remained unchanged throughout the years until 2005.Submitted by danphamngocha on
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