The pie chart compare way of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

The given chart gives information about five types (TV, Radio, Print, Online, Not specified) of known news in Canadian and Australia.

Overall

, there are many changes in accessing the news among Canadian and Australians. The largest pie is TV in Canada, with about 40%. The most popular among Australians is Online , at 52%. Online in Canada and TV in Australia showed the second level, at 36% and 37% respectively. Radio and Not specified showed the same figure in Australia, consisting of 2%. But Not specified difference to one per cent in Canada, accounting for a very small number (3%). Radio significantly rise, at 7% just over three quarters. Print is considerably large, with about 4%. But

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proportion doubled rise, with 14%.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Some parents say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for them to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion