Some people think we should stop building library because it waste of governments revenue. What extant do you agree

Every homey had their own national
library
and some of the homey even had their own
library
in each state. The facts prove that
library
is very important to every homey, and some developing countries
is
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still going to build more and more
library
which can bring benefits to their citizens.
However
, some people raise the issue that
gouvement
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government
should not build any new
library
as its
waste
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a waste
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of
governments
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government
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revenue. In my opinion, I do not agree with
this
statement. The
library
is very important for every country, and it will bring a lot of benefits to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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