The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table provides data about consumer expenditure on three different product categories in five countries in 2002.
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the proportions of money spent on food,drinks, and smoking, were the highest in all five countries,Remove the comma
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the expenditures on leisure and education were the lowest among all states.
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spendings on tobacco, the highest proportion of money, spent on these goods was in Turkey, at nearly 32%, Linking Words
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in Italy, it was almost two times lower, at around 16%.
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, the proportions in both Ireland and Spain were almost similar, 6,43% and 6,51% respectively. Linking Words
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, figures spent on recreational activities and studying were the Lowest in Spain and Ireland, just under 2% and 2,21% respectively.Linking Words
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