Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed much to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor recommending someone in your community. In your letter •describe who the person is and how you know them; • describe their contributions to the community; • explain why you think they deserve the reward.

Dear Sir, I would like to appreciate your efforts to provide recognization or reward to those who have contributed to the community. For ,
this
I am recommending one person to receive
this
honour through your newspaper.
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Ramesh, who stays in sector 32 Ludhiana, is helping poor families with medical treatment through the donations he receives from his friends, relatives and other sources. Three years back, I visited Deep Hospital for my doctor’s appointment and
while
coming out I saw him. Since
then
I find him there every evening helping patients
along with
his team. He aids financially broken patients and families in their medical treatment by collecting donations. He is trying to promote humanity with his efforts and eventually youngsters are following his footsteps by putting their efforts through physical presence
instead
of monetary help. I believe
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he is encouraging people to have a helping nature
instead
of selfishness. He is portraying those examples in real life which were left behind in books. Which is much needed for any community, society and country to evolve. Hoping to consider my request for the honour. Thanks & Regards, Sunny Dhir
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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