Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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is often suggest
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that technological
innovations
have affected our
live
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. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with
this
statement for a variety of reasons.
First,
I partly agree that technology
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a part of our life activities and much more. One of the main reasons can be that
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the internet
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internet
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are
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very popular in life.
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mean
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that everyone in the world
know
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about
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internet
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and
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technologies too.
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, the biggest influence
are
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almost companies need a person who
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about
technological
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to build up
them
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company stronger in the future.
On the other hand
, I disagree about the viewpoint that technological
innovations
affected and changed our lives. Not all human activities come
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internet
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and technology.
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is because that
just
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a thing we can
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for work or improve ourselves.
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that
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we have a lot of activities to join and learn more
some
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soft skills that technological
innovations
cannot help us in a tiny thing that we definitely need in our journey.
For instance
, on over the world still have many
business
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that they
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by
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the
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paper on the wall or singing to show the special of the business
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to buyers. In conclusion,
although
if
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technological
innovations
have been or have
changing
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our lives. I’m convinced that everything always has two sides, so that could be good if we know how to
used
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it, but it doesn’t matter if we don’t know how to
used
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technology today and in the future
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