Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It
is often suggest
that technological Change the verb form
is often suggested
innovations
have affected our live
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with Replace the word
lives
this
statement for a variety of reasons.
First,
I partly agree that technology affect
a part of our life activities and much more. One of the main reasons can be that Change the verb form
affects
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
Correct your spelling
Internet
are
very popular in life. Change the verb form
is
This
mean
that everyone in the world Change the verb form
means
know
about Change the verb form
knows
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
and Correct your spelling
Internet
absolutely
technologies too. Change the word
absolute
For example
, the biggest influence are
almost companies need a person who Change the verb form
is
know
about Change the verb form
knows
technological
to build up Replace the word
technology
them
company stronger in the future.
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their
On the other hand
, I disagree about the viewpoint that technological innovations
affected and changed our lives. Not all human activities come by
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through
internet
and technology. Correct article usage
the internet
This
is because that just
a thing we can Add a missing verb
is just
used
for work or improve ourselves. Change the verb form
use
Beside
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Besides
that
we have a lot of activities to join and learn more Add a comma
,that
some
soft skills that technological Change preposition
about some
innovations
cannot help us in a tiny thing that we definitely need in our journey. For instance
, on over the world still have many business
that they Change to a plural noun
businesses
marketing
by Wrong verb form
market
stick
Wrong verb form
sticking
the
paper on the wall or singing to show the special of the business Correct article usage
apply
out
to buyers.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
although
if
technological Correct word choice
apply
innovations
have been or have changing
our lives. I’m convinced that everything always has two sides, so that could be good if we know how to Change the verb form
changed
used
it, but it doesn’t matter if we don’t know how to Change the form of the verb
use
used
technology today and in the futureChange the form of the verb
use
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- moreover
- also
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- however
- although
- even though
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