In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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The development of science and
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has been incredible in recent decades. In the near future,
people
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will travel inside vehicles without drivers.
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advancement brings more life
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is extra convenience, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the advantages. On the one side hand
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side, driverless
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benefits. First of all, they are convenient and can be used
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time.
People
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can get in the
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even when they are tired and sleepy since they do not need to drive and be worried about the level of their awareness in order to avoid any possible
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accident just say accident.
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tiring day at work shift work, they just need to sit in the
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and enter the place addresses place destination which makes
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kind of
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very convenient.
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, those who do not know how to drive are still able to take advantage of
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modern
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. What they need to know is the postal code of the place, so it is enjoyable, without any driving
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, being able to use a
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.
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, I believe there are more drawbacks to
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exciting idea. One of the most important ones is losing jobs. Many
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are working as
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car
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driver
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, and they pay the cost of living
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job. After coming
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kind of
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, most of them would be jobless, being in
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trouble. In fact, the
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of many families would be threatened by
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technology
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. Another shortcoming which is perhaps my strongest argument
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is the safety of
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. Despite all improvements in
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, there is always the chance of errors which can cost the lives of many
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. If the system of a
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gets impaired, it could lead to a catastrophic accident since the passengers have no skills to control the
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, especially when they have no driving skills. The grave consequences of these potential mistakes should strongly be considered
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we are talking about
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’s lives.
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driverless
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seem an exciting idea
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their convenience, the risks and dangers of
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advanced
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are not sensible.
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, I agree that the disadvantages of driverless
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outweigh the benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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