Your friend wants to send her/his child to learn music. He/she asked you for some information about the music academy that you went to. Write him/her a letter. You should: - Describe the music school - Suggest a teacher or a class to go to - Explain why you recommend it.

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Dear John, How are you? I hope you and your daughter are doing well. How is your father? I got your letter regarding the music
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where I studied,
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you need some information about some good
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and your daughter Rose want to join the
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. I have good news for you. I have graduated from the
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and I am working for the local band to get some experience. Talking about the
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I was in Toronto music academy which is the next town.
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has a very excellent reputation in the world ,
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many good musicians have graduated from
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. It has many good musical instruments
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as violin, piano, flute, and DJ system. It has almost all instruments from around the world. So it would fill page to right. I just gave you an example. There is a teacher I know who is excellent at piano and I learned from him. He knows most of the instruments to play. Ask Rose what instrument she likes to play. I will text you his number
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I will speak with him personally. He has a very good reputation and students have enrolled to learn. I hope she will learn a lot and she will be a good musician in future. Hope to see you soon. Regards, Krishna
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