Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reason
According to
some people
, today’s music
can create bad infuclence
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influence
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the youngster
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and on the other side, it could bring Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
the
positivity Correct article usage
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amoung
them. Correct your spelling
among
around
This
essay will explain the
both sides.
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their
feeling and it can Correct pronoun usage
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influence
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minds
people
. As
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example
, when Add an article
an example
people
listen to religious music
, it help
them to keep their mind Change the verb form
helps
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calm
According to
survey
happened in a local newspaper, Correct article usage
a survey
people
usually listen to good music
in a
morning to have a good day as well Correct article usage
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for
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as
good
mood for the whole day. Some Correct article usage
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people
even analysize
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music
help
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Therefore
, mostly in the malls and stores people
play good music
to keep everyone’s mood good and for positivity as well.
On the other hand
, music
has some
bad impact on Correct determiner usage
a
people
as kids these days learn all the foul words from music
which is not good for their upbrining
. Young Correct your spelling
upbringing
people
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such
as somking
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singing
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drinking
music
vidoes
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videos
Music
also
become
a Change the verb form
becomes
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to have Correct your spelling
reason
fight
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fights
amoung
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among
people
. For example
, a
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music
a piece of music
music
lauched
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launched
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an
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a
amoung
different religious Correct your spelling
among
people
.
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power to Correct article usage
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people
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