IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.

The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.
#pollution #levels #london
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The provided graph illustrates the amount of pollution in London, measured in
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
, from 1600 to 2000. In
this
Linking Words
 essay, we are going to explain the comparison of trends for the parameters.
Overall
Linking Words
, the chart compares the levels of
sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 and
smoke
Use synonyms
 per
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
 as the representing indicators. Starting at 0
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic just before 1600, both levels started to increase in the following years before declining much later around 1900 and ending at 0 in 2000.
According to
Linking Words
 the data, we can observe that the quantity of
sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 and
smoke
Use synonyms
 diverged in 1600 since
sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 rose more rapidly.
Sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 numbers shot up from 0 to a little below 750
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
 between 1600 and 1700,
whereas
Linking Words
smoke
Use synonyms
 grew only from 0 to less than 250 during the same period.
Subsequently
Linking Words
, the volume for both remained to rise steadily until the year 1850 when
sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 levels reached an all-time high at approximately 800
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
.
This
Linking Words
 is followed by a sharp decrease to as low as 500
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
 in the 1940s, before continuing to decline to 0 in 2000.
Similarly
Linking Words
 for
smoke
Use synonyms
, it grew to its highest record in 1900 at 450
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
 before declining after that. Even as the numbers moved erratically from 1900 to 1950, eventually the amount of
smoke
Use synonyms
 recorded in 2000 converged with that of
sulphur
Use synonyms
dioxide
Use synonyms
 at 0
micrograms
Use synonyms
 per cubic
metre
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by lppwinahyu on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words micrograms, metre, sulphur, dioxide, smoke with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: