Some people think students in primary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays saving
money
is an important part of life and I consider we should teach students
and youngsters how to save money
so that it doesn't affect their future.
As we say invest today, live for tomorrow. We should teach students
the importance of saving and how to spend a penny, be it rich or poor. Money
is important for everybody. For example
, John earns 70,000rs saves 30,000rs invest 20,000rs 10,000 for this
personal use and 10,000 for this
household expense. Thus
John knows the value of money
. Similarly
when we give money
to students
they spend it anyhow by thinking they will get more money
tomorrow. Teaching him how to save, will be better for him so that he can manage and use that half money
tomorrow for his expenses. Moreover
, we should also
suggest them piggy bank.
In conclusion, money
for students
is important for their future and the day they will be grown up they will the value of money
and the importance of saving too.Submitted by vishwakarma.mangesh68 on
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