The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates the
income
and outcome of Harckley Hall, a public facility for recruiting over three years
. Overall
, the income
and expenditure were both higher in the second year
, and equal in the third year
.
During the first year
, the profit was higher with a total of 9.000 pounds, which is more than in the other years
, since the expenditure was lower, and the funding from other bodies was higher. According to
the data, the first year
was also
the year
where the income
of the cafe was the lowest(3.000 pounds), and throughout the years
it grew.
Furthermore
, on the graph, we can see that year
three was the year
with the least profit, this
is because the total income
equals the total expenditure(71.000) In this
year
the funding from the local council was also
minor(15.000) in comparison to the previous years
(20,000) The income
of hiring room was larger in the second year
(34.000) and it declined in the third year
(32.000)
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