The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates the
income
and outcome of Harckley Hall, a public facility for recruiting over three Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
income
and expenditure were both higher in the second Use synonyms
year
, and equal in the third Use synonyms
year
.
During the first Use synonyms
year
, the profit was higher with a total of 9.000 pounds, which is more than in the other Use synonyms
years
, since the expenditure was lower, and the funding from other bodies was higher. Use synonyms
According to
the data, the first Linking Words
year
was Use synonyms
also
the Linking Words
year
where the Use synonyms
income
of the cafe was the lowest(3.000 pounds), and throughout the Use synonyms
years
it grew.
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Furthermore
, on the graph, we can see that Linking Words
year
three was the Use synonyms
year
with the least profit, Use synonyms
this
is because the total Linking Words
income
equals the total expenditure(71.000) In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
the funding from the local council was Use synonyms
also
minor(15.000) in comparison to the previous Linking Words
years
(20,000) The Use synonyms
income
of hiring room was larger in the second Use synonyms
year
(34.000) and it declined in the third Use synonyms
year
(32.000)
.Use synonyms
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