The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates the
income
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and outcome of Harckley Hall, a public facility for recruiting over three
years
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.
Overall
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, the
income
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and expenditure were both higher in the second
year
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, and equal in the third
year
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. During the first
year
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, the profit was higher with a total of 9.000 pounds, which is more than in the other
years
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, since the expenditure was lower, and the funding from other bodies was higher.
According to
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the data, the first
year
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was
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the
year
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where the
income
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of the cafe was the lowest(3.000 pounds), and throughout the
years
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it grew.
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, on the graph, we can see that
year
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three was the
year
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with the least profit,
this
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is because the total
income
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equals the total expenditure(71.000) In
this
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year
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the funding from the local council was
also
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minor(15.000) in comparison to the previous
years
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(20,000) The
income
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of hiring room was larger in the second
year
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(34.000) and it declined in the third
year
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(32.000) .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, years, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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