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Some peopel think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertainment while other to educate. Discuss both views and opinion.

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A group of
people
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 believe that
museums
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 should be amusing
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 others still stick to the educational aspect of these
places
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. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both points of view and in the end, my own opinion will be shared.
People
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 on one side of
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 debate believe that
museums
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 should become more entertaining. The main reason behind
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 idea is that
people
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 being eager when entertainment is mixed with something is a fact
that is
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 the basis of several modern systems and
places
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.
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, students show more passion for modern education because it is more amusing,
as a result
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, their efficiency increases. So
museums
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, as educational
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, will become more delicate
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 by changing to more interesting centres; similar to schools.
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, other
people
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 believe that
museums
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 are meant to educate
people
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. They insist that becoming amusing can blur their main purpose. To exemplify, numerous cinema critics believe that movies are focusing more on computer-made scenes rather than real artistic scenes,
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 cinema is becoming more industrialized rather than being an art field.
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,
museums
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 are likely to show a less educational aspect by adding distracting elements to them.
To conclude
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,
museums
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 being entertaining has its own pros and cons. On the one hand, they can make
people
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 more eager to visit them and learn more and
on the other hand
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, they can lose their identity as cultural centers. personally, I believe that being amusing can bring lots of advantages, as long as these changes make
people
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 more enthusiastic and are not
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 with the main purpose of
museums
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.
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