The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart given shows the ways that people over 16 years old use to have access to the
Internet
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in different places
such
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as home, work, etc.
Overall
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, the most popular
devices
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among individuals are smartphones and laptops with a large number of users, respectively. In comparison, the least usage of
devices
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includes computer desktops and other
devices
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.
It is clear that
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smartphones are used mostly and have the highest popularity among individuals with 33% of
Internet
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users.
Moreover
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, as can be seen, laptops have the second position with 30% of
internet
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consumers and
this
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number is approximately twice more than the usage of computer desktops.
In contrast
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, There are 19% of consumers prefer to use tablets to be connected to the
Internet
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.
Also
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, desktop consumers are 4
percent
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per cent
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lower than tablet users. The
last
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position contains other
devices
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with 4
percent
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per cent
show examples
which is the lowest position on
this
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chart compared to others.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, devices with synonyms.
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