A friend of yours is thinking about appliying for the same course that you did at the university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university. Expalin why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

#friend #course #university #advice #expalin

DEAR RAMANDEEP, I AM GLAD TO HEAR ABOUT YOUR INTEREST IN THE SAME

COURSE

THAT I COMPLETED AT KWANTLEN POLYTECHNIC UNIVERSITY. I AM WRITING

THIS

LETTER TO GIVE YOU DETAILS ABOUT THE

COURSE

. I CHOOSE AN ACCOUNTING

COURSE

AT MY UNIVERSITY. IF

THIS

COURSE

INCLUDES VARIOUS SUBJECTS

SUCH

AS BUSINESS, COMMUNICATION AND TAX FILING AND MANY MORE COURSES, IT WILL HELP TO BRIGHTNER YOUR FUTURE.

THIS

UNIVERSITY PROVIDES ENOROMUS SERVICES.

FOR INSTANCE

: IF STUDENTS NEED ANY ASSISTANCE REGARDING THEIR CURRICULUM, A SERVICE DESK IS AVAILABLE IN THE HEART OF THE LIBRARY.

MOREOVER

, YOU CAN GET HELP FROM ADVISOR. TO ENROLL YOURSELF , YOU NEED TO APPLY ONLINE THROUGH ITS ONLINE WEBSITE OR YOU CAN BOOK AN APPOINTMENT WITH AN ADVISOR THAT WILL HELP YOU WHICH IS THE EASY WAY TO GET STUDIED

THIS

COURSE

. PLEASE FEEL FREE TO CONTACT ME ANYTIME. BEST WISHES, PAWAN

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

145 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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