You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: +Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing +Express your appreciation +And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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Dear Mr. John, Hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to thank you for your kindness and for taking care of me after our car accident on the highway.

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we did not meet before, you helped me a lot.

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I would like to introduce myself to you. My name is Prinsi Patel. I am the person who was injured in the accident. I really appreciate you for everything which you did for me. If you did not provide me a medical treatment immediately, I would suffer from many health problems.

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, I am

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thankful that you spent your precious time taking care of me.

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, I have organized a small get-to-gather party next Monday. I have already invited my relatives and friends. I would like to invite you and your family.

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, I can get another chance to thank you for your help. I will be very happy to meet you again. I look forward to receiving a positive reply to

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letter. Yours sincerely,

Prinsi

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Darshita@8612Wed Oct 23 2024

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task achievement

Consider expanding your introduction to provide more context about the accident to enhance understanding.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each idea is clearly delineated with a consistent focus in each paragraph.

task achievement

Your sincere tone is highly appropriate for a thank you letter.

coherence cohesion

The structure is clear, with a logical flow from introducing yourself, expressing gratitude, to extending an invitation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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