The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.
The charts provide information on the proportion of the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in 5 categories,
teather
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tether
, restaurant,
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museums
,
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annual
events and others. Whenever information
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into two periods from 2006 and 2016.
Overall
, it is clear to see that there
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a huge increase for restaurant reason. The biggest difference between the time period is observed in 2016, where the choice
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restaurants rose fourfold
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relative
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2006. Another noticeable contrast goes for
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museums
and
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annual
events,
while
in 2006 were 27% and 45%
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after that
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dropped
to 11% and 32% respectively.
Furthermore
, the
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percentage
of teather
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decrease a
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little
, just 5%
comparedto
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compared to
the
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. There is
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expressive difference among other choices with 5% to 8%. In summary, the two charts clearly show that all reasons
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changed, and, the most
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out is
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restaurant
restaurants
and the less is the
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types of induce.
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