You are a student living in university accommodation. The heating has not worked for some time. Write a letter to the management. In your letter Explain why you complain; Describe the problems Tell what you want them to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to draw your immediate attention to the obstacle that we faced in the university hostel

yesternight

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last night

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. Let me explain my situation, I was sleeping in the room and suddenly I felt very cold and when I checked, the heater in the room was not working. I asked my friends in the rooms beside me and they

also

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had the same issue. The temperature outside was 10 degrees and we were feeling the same in our rooms. We

are

Wrong verb form

have been

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living here for two years but it is the first time we had a problem

regarding

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with

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the heating system. Maybe it needs service or any equipment to be changed. I request you to look into the problem and send an electrician to check what's wrong.

Although

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, it's working fine now

but

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apply

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it might happen again and we don't want the same situation to occur again. I hope you will address

this

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concern as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing a positive reply from you. Yours faithfully, Sonia

sainisonia422

Jun 27, 2023

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coherence and cohesion

Use clear and simple sentences to express your ideas.

greeting and closing

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logical structure

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0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

174 words

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