You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir, I am K. R. Ravi a student of cake making

course

at your school. I have recently finished my cake preparation

course

and I am writing

this

letter to give some feedback on the

course

. At the beginning, I would like to tell, I have obtained more knowledge regarding creative ideas

while

attending classes. After finishing the cookery

course

, I was able to prepare more than 20 cakes. Especially they were for my family members.

Further

, I made cakes to celebrate some special occasions

such

as birthdays and anniversaries.

Due to

the delicious taste and attractive appearance, currently I am receiving orders from my neighbours.

Therefore

, I decided to start a cake house as my own business.

Finally

, I would like to request to conduct another cooking

course

regarding the making of pastries and bakery items. I think it will be another wonderful

course

which would be able to deliver more knowledge. If you are planning to hold the

course

which I have requested, please let me know. Thank You Yours Sincerely, R. Ravi

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