You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir, I am K. R. Ravi a student of cake making

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at your school. I have recently finished my cake preparation

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and I am writing

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letter to give some feedback on the

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. At the beginning, I would like to tell, I have obtained more knowledge regarding creative ideas

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attending classes. After finishing the cookery

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, I was able to prepare more than 20 cakes. Especially they were for my family members.

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, I made cakes to celebrate some special occasions

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as birthdays and anniversaries.

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the delicious taste and attractive appearance, currently I am receiving orders from my neighbours.

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, I decided to start a cake house as my own business.

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, I would like to request to conduct another cooking

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regarding the making of pastries and bakery items. I think it will be another wonderful

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which would be able to deliver more knowledge. If you are planning to hold the

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which I have requested, please let me know. Thank You Yours Sincerely, R. Ravi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

176 words

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