Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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These days,
media
play a significant role in spreading news worldwide. It is often argued, by many that it is good to reveal certain news regarding someone's private
life
whereas
,
others
are against it and believe that it is against ethics everyone has their own
life
and it depends on them whether to disclose the news or not. I will discuss both aspects in my essay below.
To begin
with, we live in the modern era and it is a time of social
media
where each and everyone can become aware of
others
' activity with just a touch of a button. A group of people says that the
media
has the right to reveal their daily routine to them.
For instance
, the
life
of an influencer is just like an open book whatever they do they do for fame.
Therefore
, they are liked by many individuals just because of their
life
and they want to know every bit of their lives so they can relate it with their lives.
On the contrary
, it is the right of followers to know what's going on in the
life
of the celebrities whom they are following now. They try to copy them in order to live a better lifestyle. On the flip side, there is a community
that is
against
this
saying that it is not good for an individual to show their growth and events on social
media
because if they do something wrong
that is
not good for other like if they do something wrong and hurt the intention of followers it turns in to the hate and is harmful to both public
as well as
the person himself.
Secondly
, it might lead nations towards the dark side like criminal records should be enhanced as they are showing so some of them may be robbers who try to theft them and take precious things from them or might start blackmailing for the sake of money. In conclusion, publishing personal detail is good for many reasons but at the same time, it might be injurious to the
life
of someone. But in my opinion, keep your
life
safe from
others
so that it is beneficial for both yourself and
others
as well.
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