You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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Dear Sir, I am Navneet Kaur, a second-year student in the Business course. I am writing

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letter to express my concern related to my ID card which got misplaced 2 days ago. I was travelling home by train and I thought after paying the transport fare, I put that in my bag, unfortunately, I think I left it on the seat and it got lost. Being a student, I realized that it plays a vital role in my life. I cannot buy discounted food anymore, in the college canteen, meanwhile, I need to pay the adult fare on the buses.

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, even I cannot enter the institution’s library without it. It has become a daunting task for me to survive without my identification card as my schedule totally got messed up in its absence. I would be obliged if you could apply for a new one as it is relentlessly necessary on campus. I even face trouble to enter the school without it. I have attached another application with

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depicting all my personal details required to apply it. I would be grateful for your help. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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Add a bit more detail regarding how the loss of the card impacts your academic activities, such as accessing specific facilities or services critical for your studies.

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A slight expansion of your opening and closing paragraphs to make them more engaging may help improve the overall coherence and cohesion.

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Your letter is clear and concise, making it easy for the reader to understand your situation and needs.

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Your paragraphs are well-structured, and each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which enhances readability.

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Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate, reflecting a suitable writing tone for the context.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Identification card
Student ID
Lost
Misplaced
Access
Campus facilities
Library access
Gym membership
Discounts
Pass verification
Student status
Urgent
Issuance
Replacement
Procedure
Fee
Documentation
Assistance
Resolution
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