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The image illustrates the process of creating soft cheese

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The image illustrates the process of creating soft cheese. In general, it can be seen that there are 5 stages, beginning with milk and ending with finished soft cheese. In the first stage, milk is mixed with water. It
then
 is seated in cooling equipment at 5
Celsius
degrees
 for 2
hours
.
Next,
the cooled liquid is added with some salt and
undergo
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undergoes
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 fermentation at the heat of 35
Celsius
degrees
 for 6
hours
. Having been completely fermented for 6
hours
,
this
 liquid is steamed via
the
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apply
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evaporation using more heat, which is up to 100
Celsius
degrees
. After an 8-hour evaporation stage,
this
 mixture becomes thick and stays
chill
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chilled
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 at 5
Celsius
degrees
 for 6
hours
.
The
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In the
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 final stage, soft cheese and
waste water
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wastewater
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