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Homework has always been a point of contention for many people. Many believe that schools should do away with homework altogether, while others feel that students need it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Many people claimed that
homework
 is a topic to debate in schools. There are those who argue that schools should not give their children
assignments
,
while
 others think that
students
 need to have
assignments
. In my view,
students
 should be assigned
homework
 after studying at school.
This
 essay will give certain reasons for and against
homework
, and present my own point of view on
this
 statement.
According to
students
, being given
homework
 makes them feel uncomfortable and they will not have
time
 to do other things because doing
homework
 takes up all their
time
.
Students
 have to study at school for the whole day and go to extra - classes after main classes, so having
assignments
 makes it difficult for them to rest after a hard-working day. I
also
 experience the same things as normal
students
, which is why I disagree about giving
students
 extra work after classes.
For example
, a study of professors in Vietnam shows that about 80% of
students
 in Ho Chi Minh City do not have enough
time
 to participate in outdoor activities because of hectic schedules and too much
homework
On the other hand
 , some people have a different perspective on doing
homework
, arguing that it can improve
students
’ academic performance.
Due to
 having
assignments
 at home,
students
 can understand lessons more clearly and have more opportunities to practice what they have studied at school, which can improve their score significantly I do not agree because it will take up all my
time
 studying soft skills and developing physical health. In conclusion, giving extra
assignments
 to
students
 is a common practice in schools. Each person is likely to have their own preferences, but for me, not doing
homework
 is better than having
homework
.
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